1. AMOR, sotto'l cui IMPERO molte imprese
2. van senza TEMPO sciolte da FORTUNA
3. vide MORTE su'l CARRO orrenda e bruna
4. volger fra quanta gente al MONDO prese.
5. - Per qual GIUSTIZIA – disse -a te si rese
6. né PAPA mai, né s'è PAPESSA alcuna? -
7. Rispose: - chi col SOL fece la LUNA
8. tolse contro mie FORZE lor difese.
9. - SCIOCCO, qual sei, (è) quel FOCO - disse Amore -
10. ch'or ANGIOL or DEMONIO appare, come
11. TEMPRAR sannosi altrui sotto mia STELLA.
12. Tu IMPERATRICE ai corpi sei, ma un cuore
13. benchè SOSPENDI, non uccidi, e un nome
14. sol d'alta fama tienti una BAGATELLA.
Translation:
http://www.tarotforum.net/showthread.ph ... ge=1&pp=10
1 Love, under whose Empire many deeds
2 go without Time and without Fortune,
3 saw ugly and dark Death on a Chariot,
4 going between the people it took away from the World.
5 Death said: no Pope nor Papesse was ever won
6 by you. Do you call this Justice?
7 Love answered: Him who made the Sun and the Moon
8 defended them from my Strength.
9 You are a Fool, continued Love, my Fire,
10 that can appear as an Angel or as a Devil,
11 can be Tempered by those who live under my Star.
12 You are the Empress of bodies. But you cannot kill hearts,
13 you only Suspend them. You have a name of high Fame,
14 but you are nothing but a Trickster.
On the internet there are two slightly different versions of the sonnet:
http://www.tarock.info/renier.htm
http://www.bibliotecaitaliana.it/reposi ... 6_0315.jpg
A the time, we where not sure of the meaning of the Sonnet. I ask now for some help in order to understand what makes more sense. I have being playing with a Visconti-Sforza deck, placing the trumps on the table as I repeat the sonnet: fun
Questions:
A. Who speaks first? This is a dialogue between Love and Death, but it is not clear who asks the initial question (verses 5 and 6) The subject of the first four verses is Love, so from the grammatical point of view it would make more sense if the question were asked by Love. But what does it mean that no Pope ever surrendered to (or was won by) Death? And in the other case, what does it mean that no Pope was ever won by Love? The only (legendary) Popess we know of definitely was won by Love...
B. Who answers? We don't know who asks the question, so we don't know who speaks at verses 7 and 8. From verse 9 to the end, it is clear that Love is speaking. At line 9, the literal translation would be "said Love", instead of "continued Love". It is not clear that at verses 7 and 8 Love is speaking.
C. Al line 9 Love is speaking, and he says “Sciocco” (masculine for fool). But Death (Morte) if feminine, and she is always addressed with feminine terms (“orrenda”, “bruna”, “Imperatrice”). How do you interpret the fact that in this case the masculine is used?
Finally, I have seen the thread where “SOL FAMA” in the context of the Vieville deck is discussed.
viewtopic.php?f=14&t=165&p=1971&hilit=fama#p1971
Here we have “sol d'alta fama”, which is quite similar. I am now considering a very different translation for the last three verses, where sol is read “sole” (sun) not “solo” (only):
You are the Empress of bodies, you can
suspend an heart, but you cannot kill it, nor a name
(which is a) sun of high fame. You are nothing but a Trickster.
This would express the petrarchian concept of Fame trumping Death.
Here is how Petrarch introduces Fame in the corresponding Triumph:
http://petrarch.petersadlon.com/read_tr ... ge=IV-I.en
Then, as I gazed across the grassy vale
I saw appearing on the other side
Her who saves man from the tomb, and gives him life.
As at the break of day an amorous star
Comes from the east before the rising sun,
Who gladly enters her companionship,
Thus came she.
D. Do you think that this new translation for verses 12-14 is more appropriate?
Marco